ROOM 18’S INCREDIBLE
WRITING CONTINUES!
Room 18 has continued
its focus on recount writing in Term 2, with some excellent results! Sililo’s
recount is a very descriptive piece about his incredible adventure at Kelly
Tarlton’s Underwater World. Read and enjoy!
GOING TO THE
WONDERFUL KELLY TARLTONS
Have you ever seen
the wonderful sea creatures of Kelly Tarlton’s? In the wonderful holidays me
and my family went to see the most dangerous, most ferocious sea creatures of
all, the amazing and most wonderful TIGER SHARK!
The first thing I
went to see at Kelly Tarlton’s was the amazing cold blooded penguins. When we
saw the penguin they were splashing water everywhere, even on me. Luckily I was
wearing a very comfortable jumper. The jumper was as warm as a wooly coat.
Then we went to see
the light orange sea horses. They looked so cool just like the awesomest
rainbow I had ever seen in my entire life. When we were about to go I saw
the a little baby sea horse sleeping in the mothers pouch it looked just like a
new born baby.
After that we went to
see the beautiful kings of the sea, THE SHARKS. They looked like they were fake
because they were floating still like they were dead, but when I looked at them
again they were swimming as fast as a cheetah but twice the speed. It was cool
because they were dashing through the water like it was the fastest thing in
the world, even faster than light.
Then we got to see
the wonderful short tailed stingrays. When we saw them they were gliding
through the water like they were gliding through the sky like a bird that has
finally released from its cage. Then out of that suspicious looking door, a man
in a mysterious swimming suit came out and jumped into the tank of stingrays
and had no fear of them. He was truly a man. Than he fed the stingrays with
some kind of fish food, than he told us every single fact in a recount just
like this one you are reading. He told it like he was a scientist.
The last thing we saw
was the puffer fish. It had spikes like a porcupine and could blow up like a
balloon but with water inside.
It was so cool. I’d
love to come back to Kelly Tarlton’s to see more amazing sea creatures someday.
By Sililo
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